revised bored peom.....lol just for fun?

Question

sitting here tonight with nothing but time,

looking and listening to this life that is mine,

kids running round, dog having pups, a cat thats a w***e and more junk to clean up,

complaining i am not, just letting it go,

for what comes tomorrow we will never know,

for today is tomorrow and tomorrow never comes

and yesterday is gone never to return,

say what you feel and feel how you wish,

and that way people now, you don't take any junk*

the best way to live is honest and free,

so you'll always be welcome to express yourself to me

just a few words from my mind thats messed up,

i think i said enough now, so i will shut-up


had to change a couple words because yahoo deleted my question...lol use your imagination

Answer 1

it's cute, I like it

Answer 2

well.. your poem is very interesting I liked it um... if I made a poem which I made once here it is... this is called the starting age


Now that you have just turned thirteen,
Life has gone from easy to mean.

Sassing back to your parents all day,
Seems like forever just to get away.

Climbing out of the window at night,
Just to have a little fun tonight.

Stealing your father’s credit card,
To get in debt and make life hard.

Talking on the phone from morning till night,
You’re off before your parents ignite.

Walking through the maze of clothes,
You found the sock with missing toes.

Dirty clothes piled so high,
It seems like I am buried alive.

Now you’re grounded for a week or two,
And you feel like you just got the flu.

Revenge is sweet, but just for a second,
Until it comes back to haunt you, I reckon.

This life is fun, this life is sweet,
Now you’ve seen, what it is like to be me.



here is another
this is called 1,5,10,20,50,100

Happiness comes from many objects,
But this doesn’t deal with writing checks.

A dollar is small but useful in ways,
It comes in handy days after days.

Five dollars is still on the light side,
This time someone got their first slide.

Ten dollars, well you’re getting there,
Now someone’s cupboards aren’t bare.

Twenty dollars is nothing compared to some,
For a family it’s everything they ever won.

Fifty dollars now that’s a change,
For some people that sounds strange.

A hundred dollars is for a coat that can’t be returned
Maybe someone just got healed from being burned.

Money doesn’t give you happiness,
It just makes you want to ruefulness.


last one this is called did curiosity really kill the cat
Nine lives is what cats get,
They maintain that by going to the vet.




While being absurd,
Their lives will be narrowed down by a third.


It doesn’t matter what took place,
As long as you find a solution to the case.

Annoying a dog to see what will become,
Makes you look totally dumb.



Curiosity might not have killed the cat,
If they only knew where they’re at.

Answer 3

that's very touching, I think I'll save the world now.

Answer 4

star

Answer 5

Pretty good.And in a way funny. ;-)