could you grammar check this for me? it's a letter.?

Question

1. I finally send you an e-mail. haha.
Jacob's e-mail address what I've got is [e-mail]
and I also attached your pictures to this mail as I told you.
Whoa~ time goes so fast. I have already been here for almost 4months. I haven't yet reached my goal about my English ability as much as I wanted, though.

2. Thanks to be the first one to write on my wall. I don't know how I can thank you. Can I treat you to something? I have been considering that something for 23 seconds. Caesar salad is the best. but, you have to know this.. I can treat you to only its dressing. not included salad.
and... yes, you are right. I have to fine my picture for my profile. and, when do you take me to the mall? ah.. do you also want to buy something such as... a spider to raise?

Answer 1

Dear Sweetrockers, there are too many mistakes in this email for me to list and correct starting with your initial question! The person that you are writing to is fully aware of your limited English ability but still should be able to understand and comprehend what you are trying to say. Making yourself understood is the number one priority and I would say that you have achieved that. As for English grammar? I'm afraid you still have a bit of a long trek ahead. It's a difficult language even for native speakers. Good luck in the future.

Answer 2

cool,,,thats a thumbs up