That’s…not…art!
It does not make my head hurt
It doesn’t make me do the ding dong dance
That’s…not…poetry
It failed to make me jump the ledge
There is not fun inside of this for me
No guns, no knives nor bigotry
That’s…not…painting
There’s no fire, there’s no evil, there’s no hating
You call this work of yours a triumph
This silly bit of hope and guidance…
2007-06-26 02:29:52 · 5 answers · asked by TD Euwaite? 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Miss Pau, you can cut the verses in two to make it seem longer.
2007-06-26 02:47:15 · update #1
Is funny very good,. Make good song for dancing and laughing.
I am poet/song man from Mexico help write you good song for sing ladies Yes. Together now 1234
Do the ding dance
Knives no guns bigoty
You calling this work triumph
Every body jump in air drink tequilla
See you like this song/poem I give it to you no money no copyright then I come back marry you daughters very happy.
2007-06-26 03:12:36 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
interesting piece!
still it's no art but not all art hurt, not all poetry gotta have guns to be fun and not every painting got to be evil! that's why/how we all respond to art. we are human, don't you think so!
2007-06-26 09:48:41 · answer #2 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ei thnx for the poem u made abt density but its quite short...thnx
2007-06-26 09:44:29 · answer #3 · answered by miss pau 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very well said.
It doesn't all have to be abuot misery.
2007-06-26 10:18:55 · answer #4 · answered by Todd 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
oooo! i like it! it's mean and hateful, and pretty!I like this one alot.
2007-06-26 09:43:26 · answer #5 · answered by Emo... 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋