i love you, every second of every day,
your beauty is tremendously outrageous,
your eyes twinkle in the sunshine,
your smile has an effect to make
the people around you be wowed,
your voice is like the sweet song of a bird,
your hair flows in the breeze like a movie star,
your touch is soft and gentle like cotton,
your laugh, oh your laugh,
is like the sweet laugh of an angel,
YOU are like a rainbow,
you shine with all your stylish colorful clothing,
and i know that there is a pot of gold inside you,
it is your heart.
oh how i care about you,
oh how i appreciate you,
oh how i respect you,
oh how i love you, from the stars and back.
2007-06-25 14:06:21 · 24 answers · asked by Z0HRA! 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Haha you guys are soo nice. I gave it to my mom and she started crying, she loved it soooo much she started hugging me really tight, though. Lol. and i'm only 13 and i wrote this :]
2007-06-25 14:13:25 · update #1
It's called Outspoken Love.
2007-06-25 14:18:10 · update #2
OMG, it is so touching! I'll bet your mom will cherish this forever!
2007-06-25 14:10:23 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
YOU ARE SUCH A SWEETHEART
If I could, I would give you a HUGE bear hug right now.
I wish more kids were as thoughtful and loving as you are.
Your mom is one lucky lady to have such a daughter like you.
Your poem was priceless. I would enter it into The National Library of Poetry. You very well might win, and have it published in their up comming Anthology. I had one of my poems published (among hundreds of others), and yes....they wanted me to buy their book...but I didn't. Just knowing my poem was in the book was enough satisfaction for me.
Good luck hon...I hope it gets published somewhere so others can read it too.
2007-06-25 15:12:59 · answer #2 · answered by LARGE MARGE 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful
2016-05-20 03:07:16 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was so beautiful any mother would be moved deeply by that poem knowing someone loves them like that. You are a blessing to your mother.
2007-06-25 14:09:20 · answer #4 · answered by Luv2no is in the house 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful poem! your Mom will love it-she will probably cry!
2007-06-25 14:10:01 · answer #5 · answered by Urchin 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very lovely poem! I am sure your mother will love it! I know I would adore a poem like that from my daugher! I would frame it!
2007-06-25 14:12:52 · answer #6 · answered by Sr. Mary Holywater 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice. Happy Birthday to your MOM!!!
2007-06-25 14:09:19 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
wow, thats such a great poem!
thats so nice for your moms bday, shes gonna love it!
not love like oh...thanks.../ shes gonna really love because it says how much you aprreciate her and how you think of her.
2007-06-25 14:11:13 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Oh my god!! i wish i had a talent like that!!! thats sooo sweet!!! she'll love it and tresure it for ever!!! i love it!!! + tell ur mom happy b day!!! and best wishes!!♥
2007-06-25 14:09:31 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Best Poem I Ever Heard, you should publish it.
2007-06-25 14:09:16 · answer #10 · answered by muchemu 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋