We think the idea of renting an apartment for now would be a great situation.
Is that worded right or do I just say
We think renting an apartment for now would be a great situation.
or
An apartment to rent for now would be a great situation.
Are any of those written correctly,let me know or just revise it so it's in right syntax/grammar, thanks
2007-06-25 11:35:38 · 7 answers · asked by simplemiss71 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I definitley want to keep the word situation. how about this
I think the ideal situation for us right now would be renting a condo.
would "I think" in the sentence be ok in syntax and grammar?
2007-06-25 11:44:45 · update #1
At present, renting a condo is ideal for our situation.
or
We are confident that renting a condo (apartment) is ideal for our present situation.
Don't use words like "We think." They are too passive. "We are confident" is self-explanatory; it shows you know for a fact what you want.
Good luck =)
2007-06-25 12:30:25 · answer #1 · answered by dee s 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would substitute the word 'great' with 'ideal' and say, "The ideal situation for us right now would be renting an apartment."
2007-06-25 11:39:55 · answer #2 · answered by Mickey Mouse Spears 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
eliminate "a great situation".
We think the best solution would be to rent an apartment for the time being.
2007-06-25 11:40:14 · answer #3 · answered by Paulina R 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"We think renting an apartment for now would be a great situation" is okay; "We think renting an apartment for now would be a great idea" and "We think the idea of renting an apartment for now is great" are fine as well.
2007-06-25 11:45:29 · answer #4 · answered by Me in Canada eh 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
We believe renting an apartment would be ideal.
2007-06-25 11:47:22 · answer #5 · answered by tobelove75 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
... how bout.... We both think renting an apartment is a great idea for our current situation.
2007-06-25 11:39:54 · answer #6 · answered by Dulos 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
thet r both prouper english. i used to teach english take it from a pro.
2007-06-25 12:02:50 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋