what do you think of this songi just made up?

Question

Sitting at my window sill
contemplating what to say
reaching out for a hand
that are miles and miles away

I think I said something wrong
im sure you'll let me know
I still get frightened after all
being here hundered times before

I fear your walk
your comming near
your strut; fast and tempered
is already here...oh no
what should i do?

should i curl in a ball
feel his fists, feel it all
being helpless and alone

should i run down the stairs
he will push and pull my hair
now I cant hold a thought
what should i do?

foundation really wont help me out
just stare and then thank god

I wish I was you, id die to be
you would notice a things bit odd
im laying in bed, he does his deed
i stare off to the sunrise
cant stomach the thought hes on top of me
as a tear falls from my eye

I fear your words
They're sharp as blades
cut without a thought
your frown fades..oh no
what should i do?

should i curl in a ball
feel his fists, feel it all
being helpless and alone

should i run down the stairs
he will push and pull my hair
now I cant get up, and never will...
what should i have done?

Answer 1

Its very sad......there is alot of pain in this song. It would effect alot of women who have lived thru the same situations. Good Luck with it. Kelly Clarkson would be a good one to sing it. Alot of her songs have the same feeling to them.

Answer 2

Creative. Do you play guitar? Or do you know someone who does? You could put it to music and play it at a coffee shop to get exposure.

Its very nice to have a tool to express yourself.

Best wishes.

Answer 3

Sang it to "get down on it" by Kool and the Gang, and it sounded alright

Answer 4

Incoherent gibberish.

Answer 5

wow. its great. is it a real story? right more songs like this and you'll be a star in no time. good luck.