Vote for the new masked warrior
The people number one choice
He will give them freedom
He will give them a voice
Let them run free across the plains
Run for their lives
Gave them a voice
Now they beg for mercy and pled for their lives
Army full of miniature figures
Shadows, nomadic children of the dawn
Narcotic induced heroics
A chess game no right no wrong
All this horror & tragedy
Incomparable hunger and need
Simply fueled by one man
His egotism & greed
2007-06-23 20:53:15 · 8 answers · asked by Veronica B 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
extremely powerful meaning! makes me think of hitler for some reason? LUV IT!
2007-06-23 21:02:48 · answer #1 · answered by Sasha J 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
At first it all sounded like Rudi asking for votes in NY!!
Anyway,it reads fine to me although quite militant in tone. Its like some leader is appealing for votes but threatening voters blaming his predecessor for "horror & tragedy,". . ."egotism & greed." I hope the voters see farther beyond this potential iron-handed dictator!
2007-06-24 09:51:47 · answer #2 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your punch lines where off, your jumped from one content to another stay with the same content and mention the other as a rhyme to compliment your verse, but you had nice vocabulary, you just need to place them in the right style...
2007-06-24 04:45:34 · answer #3 · answered by Black Mamba 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think after reading your poem, i can conclude that u recently ended a relationship. if not its still a nice poem.
2007-06-24 04:01:24 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice one! politically motivated!
2007-06-24 04:42:47 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats fabulous!
2007-06-24 04:01:24 · answer #6 · answered by shaunyshoo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it.
2007-06-24 03:56:50 · answer #7 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
amazing poem, i enjoyed that.
2007-06-24 03:59:40 · answer #8 · answered by AnnaDaAngel 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋