Seeing as though only one person cared to comment I'm reposting it lol...
An old pilot once said to his wife
I am sorry I can’t maintain life
this old tool of mine
Has little more time
I fear we could be in some strife
A solution was found in pill form
And no longer did his wife mourn
The blue pill he’d pop
All night they’d not stop
The old pilot felt he was reborn
But a problem occurred the next day
While walking to work, looked and did say
"Like a 12 story tower,
Everlasting in power"
But to rest he could not make it lay
On the runway a plane taxied quick
The co-pilot his face looking sick
For beside him he saw
What he’d like to ignore
The old pilot was on the wrong stick
2007-06-23 01:40:30 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
BeachBunny would you say Lord of the Rings is too long? lol :P
2007-06-23 01:55:20 · update #1
LOL. This is funny. Very good!
2007-06-23 01:49:31 · answer #1 · answered by TD Euwaite? 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
LOL!! very funny...idk maybe a little awkward at places concerning the rhythm, but definitely keep writing, cuz you have real talent!!
2007-06-23 09:55:16 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah, man, yeah, very profound and deep, like man...
the definition of a good landing, as given to me by an old pilot - anything you can walk away from... definition of a perfect landing ? if you can use the plane (or in your case the stick) again...
say, Cialis could be an answer to your problem... ???
It looks like you have done somme acrobatics on your own stick lately, was it good for you ???
"your sick man..." trailer park English academy out for the summer... ???
ARRRGGHHHH.... you think you are clever ??? planes (with the the exception of superaerobatics have not used *sticks* for decades, I guess that escaped your razor-sharp perception...
stop playing with your tool, it needs rest...
EDIT, Blumpy, or whatever tf your real name is. I lost most of my family to Hitler, you think using his image in your avatar is funny ??? or maybe cool, or maybe like hip ?
grow up and read about 60,000,000 people who lost their lives because of him, then, if you still think you want to use his image then we will sit down and talk and I will respect you... not before that happens...
how many family members you have lost to him ? please tell me. Unlike you, you coward, my e-mail address is right there... just write me... of course you have no balls to do that...
Sieg Heil !!!!
2007-06-23 10:01:35 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 3⤋
it's alright but 2 long u need 2 try 2 shorten it
2007-06-23 08:51:26 · answer #4 · answered by ♥LuV my preppyness♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Quite clever and funny.Did you write this? I like it.
2007-06-23 14:30:48 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Don't quit your day job.
2007-06-23 08:47:16 · answer #6 · answered by open4one 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
not bad...
2007-06-25 06:55:42 · answer #7 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋