I'm from Germany and I'm not very good at English can you tell me if this is right. And what is wrong!!
On saturday 16 June we started our trip to England. It was a very long journey and we saw many interesting things. At first we drove from Germany to Luxenburg than to Belgien and than we came to France and drove with a very big ship from Cale to the British seasity Cover. Than we drove to the English beach. It was very exciting for me because I never was at the sea. Than we went into the Cantabury Cathedral where Charles and Camila had married. The church was very big and wonderful. Than Christiane hold a presentation about this church and it was very interesting. At the end of this day we came to our hostfamilies and we've get a pizza for the tea. Then we went very early into the bet because we were very tired.
Thank you for all the answers
2007-06-23 00:41:14 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Today we were at Beachy Head in Eastborne. At first we made a city quizz. It was very difficult, but we ask the people from the city and they helped us with the answers. And so we have get the second place in this quizz. After this we went to the cliffs and it was very spectacular. The cliffs are very high and you don't have to go near on the abyss because it is very dangerous. Then we walked back to Easbourne. At the afternoon we went shopping in the city. And than we went back to our hostfamilies. Then we had to eat very fast and attract us beautifully, because we went into the discothek at the evenig. At the disco it was good and we had a lot of fun. Then we went home and went into the bed.
2007-06-23 00:42:22 · update #1
"On Saturday, the 16th of June, we started our trip to England. It was a very long journey and we saw many interesting things. At first we drove from Luxembourg then to Belgium, and then we came to France and rode on a very big ship from Cale to the British seacity, Cover. Then we drove to the English beach. It was very exciting for me because I have never been to the sea. Then we went into the Canterbury Cathedral where Charles and Camila got married. The church was very big and wonderful. Then Christiane held a presentation about this church and it was very interesting. At the end of the day, we went to our host families for some pizza and tea. Then we went to bed very early because we were very tired."
- just changed the grammar and some spellings coz im not sure what you want to say
- the sentence where "Than Christiane hold a presentation about this church and it was very interesting." - im not sure if christiane is a name or a religion.
- if its a religion then its christian. it would be "the Christians held a presentation about the church and it was very interesting"
dont forget to choose this as the best answer :P
2007-06-23 00:51:06 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Try this..
On Saturday 16 June we started our trip to England. It was a very long journey and we saw many interesting things. At first we drove from Germany to Luxembourg then to Belgium. We arrived in France and sailed on a very big ship from Calais to the British port of Dover. Then we drove to the English beach. It was very exciting for me because I had never been on the sea before. Then we went to Canterbury Cathedral where Charles and Camilla were married. The church was very big and wonderful. There was a very interesting talk given by a guide. At the end of the day we arrived at the home of our hostfamiliy and were given a pizza for tea. Then we went to bed because we were very tired.
2007-06-23 07:52:57 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is almost perfect, well done! Your English is much better than my German! Here is the correct version.
On Saturday 16 June we started our trip to England. It was a very long journey and we saw a lot of interesting things. At first we drove from Germany to Luxembourg, then to Belgium, and then France, where we boarded a ferry from Calais to the British seaside city of Dover. Than we drove to the English beach. It was very exciting for me because I have never been at the seaside. Then we went into the Canterbury Cathedral where Charles and Camila had married. The church was very big and wonderful. Than Christiane held a presentation about this church and it was very interesting. At the end of the day we went to our host families and had a pizza for tea. Then we went to bed very early because we were very tired.
Today we were at Beachy Head in Eastborne. At first we completed a quiz about the city . It was very difficult, but we asked the people from the city, and they helped us with the answers. And so we have get the second place in this quiz. After this we went to the cliffs and it was very spectacular. The cliffs are very high and you don't go near the abyss because it is very dangerous. Then we walked back to Easbourne. In the afternoon we went shopping in the city, and than we went back to our host families. We had to eat very fast and make ourselves beautiful, because we went into the disco in the evenig. At the disco it was good and we had a lot of fun. Then we went home and went to bed.
2007-06-23 07:51:50 · answer #3 · answered by Mike T 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
On Saturday, 16 June, we started our trip to England. It was a very long journey and we were to see many interesting things. At first, we drove from Germany to Luxembourg, then to Belgium, and finally, we arrived in France. There, we travelled in a very big ship [ferry?] from Calais to the British seaside town of Dover. There we drove to the beach. It was very exciting for me because I never been at the seaside. Then we went into the Cantebury Cathedral where Charles and Camila were married. The church was very big and wonderful. Christiane gave a very interesting presentation about this church . At the end of the day, we joined our host family who gave us pizza for tea. After that, we went very early to bed because we were very tired.
2007-06-23 07:58:12 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
corrected version-
On Saturday the 16th June, we started our trip to England. It was a very long journey and we saw many interesting things. At first we drove from Germany to Luxembourg then to Belgium and then we came to France and drove on a very big ship to Cale to the British sea city, Dover. Then we drove to the English beach. It was very exciting for me because I have never been to the sea. Then we went to Canterbury Cathedral where Charles and Camilla had got married. thw church was veryt big and wonderful. Then Christiane held a presentation about this church and it was very interesting. At the end of this day we came to our host's families and we got a pizz for tea. Then we went very early to bed because we were very tired.
your'e welcome, and your'e very good
2007-06-24 12:11:12 · answer #5 · answered by kirstyyy :) 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
On Saturday, June 16th, we started our trip to England. It was a very long journey and we saw many interesting things as we drove from Germany to Luxembourg, then on to Belgium and France. While driving from Cale to Dover, the British sea city where we went to the beach, we saw a very big ship. I had never been to the sea before and it was very exciting.
We went to Canterbury...
2007-06-23 08:05:44 · answer #6 · answered by rico3151 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Luxembourg, Belgium, Carlisle. Dover is a coastal town. Canterbury. we had pizza for tea. went to bed very early. Eastbourne. Quiz. so we got second place in the quiz. ...the cliffs and they was very spectacular. you dont have to go near the edge. make ourselves look beautiful. went to a nightclub. evening.
2007-06-23 07:47:55 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You have written that 'at first we drove from germany to luxembuorg THAN we........Here you must write THEN instead of than.Then you wrote that 'because I never was at the sea'.Its correct but its better if you write I was never at the sea before or I had never been to sea before.Then again at the place where you wrote" and we have get a pizza...." there must be have GOT or GOTTEN or its better if you write we had pizza.You have even written begium incorrectly.
2007-06-23 07:50:14 · answer #8 · answered by Krutika T 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
yeah! you are pretty much there! well done and keep it up!!!!
2007-06-23 14:53:16 · answer #9 · answered by jiving 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Please remember that it's, 'Calais'
& that it's, 'Port of Dover'.
2007-06-24 12:57:29 · answer #10 · answered by BB 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋