I am the sun
The heat that keeps you living,
Thriving
I fear the Cold winter that kills that grass and flowers
Seeping,
Crawling
Biting
I wake to the moon snoring
Stars giggling,
Wind whistling,
Trees whispering,
I open up and let the heat flow from me
I hear the children,
Laughing,
Crying,
Playing,
I am the sun
Whoooooooosssshh
I hear him coming
Seeping,
Crawling,
Biting…….
My enemy.
I back away,
Getting smaller and smaller
While you get colder and colder
See you next summer!
For I will be back,
But for now,
I travel,
To the other side
Where I can hear children..
2007-06-22 14:06:39 · 13 answers · asked by Cassie 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
...
Laughing,
Crying,
Playing,
Once more,
Living, thriving, loving,
For ever and ever
Your friend,
Your enemy,
For ever and ever,
But when I hear the
Whooooosh
The biting,
Crawling,
Seeping,
I go away,
But not forever.
For I am the sun
2007-06-22 14:07:16 · update #1
thanks so much, and yes i did write it, it was an assignment to write a voice poem like 2 months ago. I have a lot this one was just my favorite
2007-06-22 15:22:45 · update #2
since you liked it i guess i can post more, i have one with like 6 drafts though so ill pick my fav.
2007-06-22 15:24:20 · update #3
well here is another. not so good. but what ever
I am a loin cub
Waiting for my inheritance,
To one day,
Be the king of the jungle
I hope to one day be like my father,
Fair,
Just,
I will rule
With a shaggy crown
And golden fur
Feared by all
With a roar like thunder
And a wise mind,
I will rule my people
But for now I am just a loin cub
Waiting for my inheritance,
To one day,
Be the king of the jungle
Feared by all
I am a young adult
My father is growing old
I will soon come into my inheritance,
To be the king of the jungle
But for now I wait,
For I am just a young loin,
Going out for the hunt
To find a mate
Strutting through the forest
With all eyes on me
For I am the prince of the jungle
Waiting for my inheritance
To become,
The king of the jungle
I am an adult lion
My father
Wise
And fair
Is giving me my inheritance
Guiding me through hardships
For I am only a young king
Hoping to one day be like my father
Wise,
Fair,
Ruling my peopl
2007-06-22 15:32:15 · update #4
le,
With a roar like thunder
A shaggy crown
And golden fur
With my lion cub,
Waiting for his inheritance
To one day be the king of the jungle
But for now he is only a lion cub
Hoping to be like his father
With a roar like thunder
A shaggy crown
And golden fur
But for now he is just a lion cub
2007-06-22 15:33:13 · update #5
it's so good i dropped my jaws
2007-06-22 14:09:33 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dat was a really good peom hope u want 2 be a peot cuz dat was really good!
2007-06-22 21:10:53 · answer #2 · answered by BLAH!! 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Excellent, you have a talent there. Keep writing.
Enya<3
2007-06-22 21:11:51 · answer #3 · answered by ♥Enya♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about this one?
Tommorow i will eat a pops tart and then i will fart i think your pretty smart.
2007-06-22 21:09:39 · answer #4 · answered by L 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very good! You are very creative with words, keep it up!
2007-06-22 21:12:32 · answer #5 · answered by Lea 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is good but how do we know is yours when you can copy and paste.
2007-06-22 21:12:13 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is pretty good, like 5 hikus in one.
2007-06-22 21:09:54 · answer #7 · answered by arodhater 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it. You're really creative.
2007-06-22 21:12:07 · answer #8 · answered by Ashley 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it ALOT :)
--- All of it is so true that like u always think of that stuff and sometimes it happens :)
Please Post More i really like it :)
2007-06-22 21:10:40 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's really good! I like it!! ^_^
2007-06-22 21:11:20 · answer #10 · answered by Becky<3 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋