Can you please revise this sentence for me.
I miss your voice
I know its gramatically correct but if you're writing it and saying it to your mate how can you make it sound better maybe a word to describe the voice but I dont know about sweet. Please revise this sentence and add a little more to it even if its 2 or 3 sentences long, thanks Any writers or people with good writing skills :-) I definitely want to change the sentence so dont say i should leave it be way it is, thanks.
2007-06-22 12:22:46 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I miss hearing your voice.
2007-06-23 10:30:28 · answer #1 · answered by Beach Saint 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Soothing, Reassuring, Melodious, Charming?
2007-06-22 19:26:54 · answer #2 · answered by wonderland.alyson 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Have your character list various very specific things he or she misses: "I miss your smile when I tell a bad joke. I miss your teasing when I've had a bad day. I miss your your shoulder. I miss your hands. I miss your mouth. I miss your voice."
This of course depends on how long you want what really is a declaration of love to be in your scene.
2007-06-22 19:28:49 · answer #3 · answered by SallyJM 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I miss the comforting sound of your voice.
2007-06-22 19:48:38 · answer #4 · answered by Zeera 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Add adjectives to voice: soft, gentle, sexy, husky, trembling, or whatever describes it. Add adverbs or adverbial phrases to describe miss: terribly, every moment of every day, whenever we're apart, etc. Hope this helps. Good Luck!
2007-06-22 19:33:39 · answer #5 · answered by Jan F 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
i miss the sound of your voice
2007-06-22 19:27:17 · answer #6 · answered by naughty_cheenu 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
- I miss talking to you.
- I miss your ecstatic/enchanting/loving /soothing voice.
- I miss hearing your voice.
2007-06-22 19:27:12 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Darlin',I so miss the low,raspy lull of your melodic voice.
2007-06-22 19:56:53 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Kind of need what is before it and what is after it in order to add detail to it.
2007-06-22 19:27:05 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋