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i am writing a song and i need help with the next few lines. here's what i got so far

how in the world,
do i know you?
this is a mystery to me;
satalites and electricity
are the only things i care about,
the only things i know about.

2007-06-22 10:30:26 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music Music Rock and Pop

this song is not about a girl. it is just to get people to join my band (i don't have a band !)

2007-06-23 12:59:43 · update #1

14 answers

im sorry i can't help u @ the mo. but i just wanna say that that's some awesome lyrics that actually has potential! u rock <3!

2007-06-22 10:35:01 · answer #1 · answered by Armatage Shanks 5 · 0 1

Sorry, but, YOUR writing the song. Not us. We're not just going to give you lyrics and then what if your song is #1 on the charts? Will we get credit - no.

Anyways, we don't even know what the song is about and do you think all of the lyricists out there got help from random people on a website? No. Good luck. ;)

2007-06-22 17:35:05 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2 0

I can hear your voice in the distance
I hear the power in your words
You draw me like a magnet
I see the light in your songs, when i look up to the sky

Come closer to me
Come closer to me
Come closer to me

Well that's all i can come up with because you wrote satalites and electricity is the only thing you care about. I did not want to take away from your original thought.

2007-06-27 12:59:08 · answer #3 · answered by Laura F 3 · 0 0

soz, but if u cant write the song urself then it isn't the same. No one will join ur band if u needed help write the song to begin with. Try to get some inspiration...or listen to othr songs.

2007-06-30 17:23:59 · answer #4 · answered by somebody 2 · 0 0

If you weren't you, who would I be?
The universe turns me to cold,
but I don't see why.
If you had my heart sold,
would you bear my night?

Email me and tell me what you play. If you're not under 20, then I'm not interested. I play guitar and the drums.

2007-06-28 23:23:57 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

they`re the only things that I can see.
How in the world can I know you
I only know that I care about me
How do we get in this business
of you trying to tell what is and will be

2007-06-22 17:48:56 · answer #6 · answered by Blessed 7 · 0 0

nobody is goin to reaaaally help you out u need to make a song all by yourself because whos idea was it..um................yours so dont ask other people that u dont know just sit down and ask urself

2007-06-30 01:53:00 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

how in the world,
do i know you?
you're an enigma that i can't trace:
a dot com site that i cannot place,
yet somehow i downloaded your love.
now i'm wondering what you're thinking of.

2007-06-30 10:56:00 · answer #8 · answered by Hello Kitty 3 · 0 0

I think this is what you call writers block.
you are writing the song.
you need to get more insperation.
mybe you need to love this girl more :)

2007-06-22 17:40:44 · answer #9 · answered by illustrious 2 · 0 0

That right ther is totally freakin awesome! I WANNA JOIN!!!

2007-06-30 15:06:29 · answer #10 · answered by defleppardgirl 3 · 0 0

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