What do you think of these lyrics?... new ones jus did this morning?

Question

Its not my fault that it happened to you
But it did, im not sorry
that you never have a clue
its like being alone on a safari
if you get lost then your going down
as some predators surround
the factors that play in this world
see the end and a whirl im broken
(prechorus)
tomorow we'll take you out
of course when you shout
"this isnt what i wanted
THIS IS WHAT YOU WANTED"
(chorus)
Im not thinking of leaving again
(but you know i will if you keep this up)
its not as bad when you danced in the rain
(but silly pictures make my head erupt)
its not my fault you had the problems
(its your job to work until you solve them)
Im not giving up until you give up
im not giving up til you shut up

I take a scenic view this time
a fallen creature acts as a preacher
to those who have fallen before he
we can learn a lesson from this teacher
I never had enough to give
and im sure it wont feed us all
but im sure you wont leave us
crazy as a pre-nup
(prechorus)
(chorus)

bridge

i know this wasnt what you want,
again at times liek these
but i solved it out
and im taken out the night
i never knew that this world was pieces
crumbling to bits in the rain small creases
i never had to let you go
cause all this im sure that you know

(chorus again)

i know some lyrics are weak... point them out and give advice

Answer 1

i really like it. The part about the safari is kinda weird, but i understand what you are talking about. Its really good though!! and as for that person who wishes they could imitate simon, he is dumb!!

Answer 2

I just wish that I could imitate Simon Cowell.