what do you think of this song I wrote. email me for more of my stuff. its all copywritten*?

Question

When did you stop loving me, replayin’ all the old home movies. You used to hold me in your hands, your little girl, your biggest fan.
And it seems as I got older the bottle took my place, a few more shots of whiskey, and a bruise across my face…..
When did I go so wrong, or did you hate me all along?
What made you change, could we everr be the same? (ever be the same)
I miss you dad.
I remember, sitting on the floor, listening and taking in your every word.
You were my hero, my superman without a cape, it was my turn to save you but I was just to late.
Your so far gone, you cant even see the light, let me play you a song, to bring you back just one more night.
Love me like you used to, I can be the same little girl again if that’s what it takes to make all this **** end.
I can let go, of all of these damn dreams, because the music isn’t as important as you are to me.
Break this guitar across you knee, go ahead and break it just like you broke me.
When did I go so wrong, or did you hate me all along?
What made you change, could we everr be the same? (ever be the same)
I miss you dad.
And ive stuck around for far to long, the only thing you need is that bottle, so Ill leave you tonight with just a song.
I waited hopelessly with open arms for you, but it hurts when all along you just couldn’t approve.
My dreams meant nothing, and you brought me down for so long until I realized that it was you who was wrong all along.
So Im driving down this highway and Im leaving you tonight, I promise you dad you’ll be seeing my name in lights.
When did we go so wrong?
Was it like this all along?
Why did it change, could we ever be the same? (ever be the same)
Ill be missing you dad.

Answer 1

i miss my dad too! that was really sweet )