Join me, fair maidens, for a dip in the moat.
To do so would really get that mean knight's goat.
We'll splash for a while,
Then dry off with a smile,
And chase it with a cold root beer float.
2007-06-20 15:14:41 · 17 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Nice poem & also a nice dragon- fully dedicated to the maidens ;) keep it up...
2007-06-20 22:13:45 · answer #1 · answered by ♪Zodiac♫ 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Kind of cute really A bit awkwardly constructed. I love the idea of the dragon sucking on breath mints. Were they Altoids perhaps? But I wonder how he keeps them from the line of fire, so to speak? Lord and Ladies don't shake their groove thangs. Not in public anyhow.Keep at it, though. because you have something there. And besides, I just LOVE dragons! Questions: who is the Madam, and why isn't the Knight welcome? And can the dragon bring back the rain?
2016-05-21 04:40:14 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lovely poetry! Ha Ha! Good poem.
2007-06-20 15:18:49 · answer #3 · answered by cats 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You really should step away from the punch. I believe it's probably 90 proof by now...and it shows.
2007-06-20 15:21:35 · answer #4 · answered by Honesty 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds absolutely lovely. Billy Boy, you really do have a way with words. ;)
2007-06-20 15:42:14 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Sure I was waiting for it nice billy boy
2007-06-20 15:18:02 · answer #6 · answered by marsh 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Billy, you sure know how to make a hard day brighter!
2007-06-20 15:34:46 · answer #7 · answered by PJPeach 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
When posted this poem I was fast asleep
and now I 'm awaken, but, sealed is my lip....
2007-06-20 21:34:29 · answer #8 · answered by Alice in Wonderbra 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That sounds simply divine!
2007-06-20 15:20:46 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Bravo! So beautiful, I have to stop and collect my breath for a moment.....
2007-06-20 15:17:22 · answer #10 · answered by Kiss My Shaz 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋