what do you think of this song that i wrote???????????????????

Question

Hills of Agony

Do you wanna stay lost forever?
Never to see the light again
I know that the hills of agony
Are trying to bring me down
Away, away, away from the light
But if you wanna say amen to this
Wasted life then you’ve gotta try
To fix it all it’s not to late to lose it all
Lose it all lose it all

Chorus:
It’s really not too late to
Fix most of your mistakes
On The hills of agony
Because If you wanna fly high
You really can’t waist your time
On the hills of agony

Do you wanna really suffer?
Stay lost and be stupefied
Do you wanna surrender?
Surrender to the hills of agony
Do you wanna say amen forever?
Get lost in the dark and
Think that you can try to wade it out
From the hands of time
Do you really wanna be free?
Then sing with me

(Chorusx2)

Are you crying out loud?
Because it’s not to late to fix most of your mistakes
On the hills of agony so sing with me

(Say) Amen, amen, amen
(Hey) Amen, amen, amen
(Say) amen, amen, amen

Answer 1

heck yes thats really good can u teach me how to write songs like that

Answer 2

The 'amen' part at the ends sucks. But the rest of the song is good.

Answer 3

Looks like a gospel music. You better have a good tune for it!

Answer 4

Yea. It sound sorta Gospel/ Religious kind. I don't know why it's very beautiful though.

Answer 5

That song sucks! it doesn't even rhyme. It sucks somuch, it makes fallout boy sound godly.

Answer 6

If you wrote those lyrics you have talent,
get someone to add the music.

Answer 7

I like your song. Great message.

Answer 8

That's a great song!

Answer 9

i reallly like it. i know a few people in my school that write their own songs, but they r not as good as this. lol its cool..

Answer 10

I like it