our staff continually evaluates and improves the program to better meet the needs of our children, what their families needs, and help the community, too.
1. children better, and what their families need, plus the community.
2. children. to give their families what they need. and help the community, too.
3. children, what their families need, and what the community needs, too.
4. children, with what their families need and helping the community.
5. children, their families, and the community.
2007-06-18 13:52:50 · 5 answers · asked by janely 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
5
2007-06-18 13:57:24 · answer #1 · answered by roynburton 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
5
2007-06-18 14:00:42 · answer #2 · answered by ♥Gamergurl♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Choice #5: children, their families and the community
2007-06-18 14:03:47 · answer #3 · answered by claudette c 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
5
You need "parallel structure"
Since the sentence reads:
"to better meet the needs of"
You are basically saying:
the needs of "our children"
the needs of "their families"
the needs of "the community"
The other choices are not parallel in structure.
They all use different forms and phrasing
which cannot be combined.
2007-06-18 13:57:27 · answer #4 · answered by Nghiem E 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
5, and only 5. The rest suck.
2007-06-18 13:57:15 · answer #5 · answered by PumpkinEater 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋