whos is better?

Question

whenever i see you i feel so empty
only because i know you dont want to be with me
i love you so much and i wanna be more then a friend
but i know that will never turn out in the end

i dont understand how i can somwhat forget you during the day
but when i come home its like i have nothing left to say
because all of a sudden your always on my mind
and i dream of being with you till the end of time

i miss our conversations and our laughs
i miss what we said and the fun we had
i wanna be with you,cause i love you alot
and i know im not exactly what you want

well if you change your mind im still hear
you can talk to me...please have no fear
cause altho i wont have you,your still my friend
we will be friends until the very end


or....

unspoken words

As my tears start to fall
and my eye liner starts to run and smudges
I scream at the top of my lounges
I LUV U
i really do an di am sorry 4
wat happned
So i dig the blade in deeper
then you walk in and yell and what are you doing
then i say i am solving are problem
Then the screaming slowly fades
and i can feel my self going numb
so with my last gasping breaths of life
i say goodbye
then i feel his trembling lips touch mine
and i here him say i luv u
but its to late

Answer 1

Having a hard day? Choose whichever you feel best conveys your true feelings. No one can make that decision for you.

Answer 2

Well, as a poem, the second is better.

As a predicament, the first is better. You're alive, your heart can heal and the person's still your friend.

Answer 3

I like the second one better.

Answer 4

I like the second one ! Pretty good.

Answer 5

First one caz it reminds me of when i use to like this girl i knew. long time ago though lol.

Answer 6

Is this Philosophy or Poetry ?