How rewrite this sentence with a more descriptive verb: "I worked as a supervisor of three team members."?

Question

How could correctly rewrite this sentence with a more descriptive verb: "I worked as a supervisor of three team members."?

How could correctly rewrite this sentence so that it doesn't contain a negative qualifier? "Although I am not very familiar with Lotus, I am experienced in other spreadsheet programs."

Answer 1

1. "My supervision of three team members was successful and resulted in the completion of ... (some project or something)."

2. "I have a thorough working knowledge of several spreadsheet programs, such as (name a couple), and a general familiarity with others, including Lotus (and maybe one or two others)."

Answer 2

I supervised a 3 member team at work I am experienced in spreadsheet programs but, have to learn more of Lotus.

Answer 3

Use an lively verb in sentence one quite of a distinctive shape. I supservised a three-member group. For the 2nd, undertake a favorable shape, as you stated you may. I even have very sturdy experience in different spreadsheet courses yet much less familiarity with Lotus right now.

Answer 4

in America, direct verbs and brevity help possible employers figure out if you'll fit their opening.


Try this: "I supervised three people." While your past employer may have referred to them as team members, I'm not sure what that would add to your employment application.


also (if true): "I am proficient with [ss name .. likely Excel??] through [level -- macro writing?, etc.]. To the extent Lotus is similar, I'll have no trouble adapting."

{I'm aware that Lotus isn't very common any more, so are most potential employers.}


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