Love is a passion
But lovers turned it sour
With their unrealistic expectations
Years of relationship collapsed within hours
Words are told but never turns true
Shedding tears, the action most couples do
Fall in love but not with their partner
Blinded by lust leading them to disaster
In the still of the night
I vow to make you happy with all my might
To be with you I won't surrender the fight
Earth Angel, I won't let you fall to the wrong side
I can't promise you miracles
But I'll stand with you facing obstacles
I can't swim seven seas to be with you
But leaving you in aggravation is something I won't do
You shine lights to this dark heart of mine
Bind me with heavenly feelings no man can find
Knowing I'm a pessimist when it comes to love
You proved that it's a special thing sent from above
In the still of the night, I prayed for your arrival
Finally God have sent me the special girl
Now it's my turn to make it happen
This poem is the first step to our heaven.
2007-06-17 14:59:37 · 9 answers · asked by SHiDi 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Have you been listening to the oldies station again?
2007-06-17 15:05:18 · answer #1 · answered by Alice K 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
:) This is lovely.
What you say in the beginning is very true; Love these days is undermined and more of sporadic lust than commitment... if this was written to someone in particular, it is very sweet.
Keep writing!
2007-06-17 15:18:58 · answer #2 · answered by grace 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ay-May-Zing
2007-06-17 15:09:43 · answer #3 · answered by alpha_omega162009 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was a good poem.Must have taking you a while to write it, but it was pretty good.
2007-06-17 15:05:08 · answer #4 · answered by hybrid7wolf5 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey thats really good, it has alot of meaning to it and i really like it, keep up the good work
2007-06-17 15:03:45 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its really great, it showed so much feeling, and truth.
2007-06-17 15:20:27 · answer #6 · answered by Mercedes M 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good
2007-06-17 15:03:51 · answer #7 · answered by bob 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's really goood
2007-06-17 15:08:06 · answer #8 · answered by Orange? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow. i really like it.
2007-06-17 15:03:10 · answer #9 · answered by Brianne M 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋