Rage twists in my soul.
Hate rises and screeches
The pain i thought would never come
has now come ten fold
I feel a pit a loathing
bubbling to a begining
I loved you i needed you
i ******* gave everything
I was thrown back
smacked around
you made me lifes *****
You toyed with me
you played my heart
like a plastic guitar.
But now
i seek revenge
You fed me lies
time and time
to many times to count
you played with my feelings
Like an aged peice of playdo
Crumbling beneath your fingers
Fading away
Like ashes in the wind
I loved you i needed you
i ******* gave everything
I was thrown back
smacked around
you made me lifes *****
You toyed with me
you played my heart
like a plastic guitar.
But now
i seek revenge
Your heart is mine for the bidding
i will return the favor
Of your loves fatal wish
To destroy me
you won that round with a kiss
but trust me honey
ill win the war
cuz baby without your cold heart
ive become rotten to the core
I loved you i needed you
i ******* gave everything
I was thrown back
smacked around
you made me lifes *****
You toyed with me
you played my heart
like a plastic guitar.
But now
i seek revenge
2007-06-17 08:21:57 · 11 answers · asked by hopelessly romantic♥ 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
its cool!!!
uve got talent!
keep going!
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2007-06-17 08:24:58 · answer #1 · answered by d. 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That you sound like you want to hurt this person, so if I was this person I would be careful of you. Seek help, you have the potential for danger
2007-06-17 08:27:56 · answer #2 · answered by Joyce B 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it depends how you are doing it
like a revenge song like carrie underwood would be really good... something kinda popish
but if you are talking emo songs...eh not so much
it sounds like everything else
2007-06-17 08:25:25 · answer #3 · answered by vintagecrayon21 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The lyrics are good for what they are, but the song is extremely dark and depressing.
2007-06-17 08:30:51 · answer #4 · answered by Aubri M 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its ok Im also Into song writing its alot of fun and I think you should keep doing it
2007-06-17 08:28:49 · answer #5 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice.
2007-06-17 08:27:08 · answer #6 · answered by jm8313 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
omg!!! i feel like crying :( soooo beautiful girl what you need to do now is give it to a passionate singer ahhhhh how i would love to hear it broadcasted.
2007-06-17 08:28:20 · answer #7 · answered by RoChEr 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its really nice, i like how you put meanings behind the words. good work. tell me when you get your own demo cd (:
2007-06-17 08:24:39 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
long but great!sounds like...o.0
2007-06-17 08:29:01 · answer #9 · answered by ♥Rin♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds emo
kind of poetic
2007-06-17 08:25:29 · answer #10 · answered by Angelacia baybeeeeee 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋