What keeps me here
If I left would you care
Maybe you wouldn't notice
I reach out to you
Silently screaming in pain
Despair encases my soul
I'm trapped
Can't cry, can't breathe
Numb
And so I must escape
End my pain by my own hand
It flows from my body on a crimson wave
I grow weaker
Enclosed by darkness as freedom inches closer
I fall deeper into the abyss
Peacefully asleep
For all time
2007-06-17 00:30:58 · 5 answers · asked by Philomena M 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
How beautiful and how sad. I hope you are not writing this for yourself. If so get some help...see a counselor or psychiatrist or go to your local ER. Your talent is mulitfold and your life is just on the verge of a new beginning. Good Luck to you and God Bless.
2007-06-17 00:40:18 · answer #1 · answered by ? 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
What can I say is this poem about yourself, nothing or nobody is worth living in pain for or harming yourself, life is important
and everyday a blessing, I only say this cause in ten years I have seen people die suffering from cancer some in more pain than others, they did not choose to die, I also worked in palative care and saw alot of suffring, some took it in their
stride, and their pain and grief they tried to hide, I actually
wrote a poem about this called never forgotten yesterday is history tomorow is a mystery we have only got today
Margaret
2007-06-17 12:07:11 · answer #2 · answered by maggie 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aw how sweet it is an excellent poem but also a sad one. Thanks for sharing it with us. I would say 10/10.
2007-06-17 12:37:50 · answer #3 · answered by Black 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey lighten up. nice poem. kind of thing i would write lol
2007-06-17 08:29:09 · answer #4 · answered by country gal 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
call it "trapped"
deep sense of woe, deep sense of regret in moving tone as in dream or in love!
2007-06-21 01:28:01 · answer #5 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋