Why Can't I Forget You"
Why can't i forget you
I think of you and i try to have this empty emotion
and I try to let go of this devotion
that i always had for you
and i tell myself "I can make this through"
I felt i needed you in my life
But i strive
To let those feelings i had,be gone
Why can't i be settled in my mind
and move on with the fact your defined
to never be mine
I felt this connection with you
that I had with no other
If i only knew
Why can't I forget you
I looked into your eyes
and you grabbed my attention
with your affection
and I barely knew you back then
Yes its my song again, i tried to go back and fix it and change things around. Tell me what u think, i know its not that good cause I'm only 13. It is not completely finished. Just tell me what u think of my lyrics? What can i do to make them better?
2007-06-16 12:23:48 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Lyrics
love it... im only 14, but i cant write a song that good... it kinda makes me think of the position im in right now... but u no its not such a great idea to put ur lyrics online... cuz someone can rip em off and u cant say anything about it...
2007-06-16 12:27:44 · answer #1 · answered by single_once_more 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it it's real not bull like alot of crap that's out there right now U should keep it up and I agree with nikki you could get ripped off if you put all your lyrics online oh and u do need a chorus and a bridge but it still rox =)
2007-06-16 15:10:10 · answer #2 · answered by ~Again~ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
omg you write that that was awesome keep writing you are great keep it up you should become a song writer for real ill tell a few guys about u i got hock ups peace girly girl
2007-06-16 12:49:20 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
well it doesnt have a definite chorous and no bridge itd pbly make a good country song tho
2007-06-16 13:43:15 · answer #4 · answered by josh o 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yo thats tight u added sum stuff its kool i like it a lot keep doin ur thang gurl
2007-06-16 18:38:28 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Thank you for sharing it with everyone. Your lyrics have meaning - I'm sure - to so many people.
2007-06-16 12:51:21 · answer #6 · answered by Zombie Birdhouse 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its better than most of the new songs now. but its.. kinda short. maybe you should extend it.
2007-06-16 12:28:06 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
love it!! sounds like something i could dedicate 2 my ex
2007-06-16 12:27:49 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I feel the same way right now........... I love it !! Great Job!!
2007-06-16 12:28:03 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
great!!! keep writing more songs!! :)
2007-06-16 12:27:04 · answer #10 · answered by Cat_Woman 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋