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Killing in the name
She wasn't perfect
You weren't either
I was the one
Keeping you together
Your hug
Your touch
You grasp my hand
You say its over
I think I'm glad
But I don't know yet
Its hard to explain
But you know me
I'll get over it
Wipe the tears
Bandage my knees
Laugh and smile
While she's holding you hand
Silence
A new beginning
Maybe with me
2007-06-15 08:28:13 · 15 answers · asked by !~CoNvErSe~! 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Bitter/hopeful?
2007-06-15 08:31:21 · answer #1 · answered by Lori 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-18 22:00:35 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was a beautiful point, but it was a little bit... well idk... distorted I guess. When you first read it, it's like your reading a bunch of random words. Once you read it a couple times, you start to understand it better. Try making it more powerful so the first time reading it they get what you're saying. I loved the concept, it was very touching. Keep up the good work!
2007-06-15 08:33:38 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I honestly like it, the words all sound good together, but each line could be a little longer to fit a poems format. But its good.
2007-06-15 08:32:10 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's okay. it kind of gives you a slight hint of what's going on, but leaves everything open enough that a reader could insert there own feelings and experiences into it very easily.
not bad. honest opinion.
2007-06-15 08:32:42 · answer #5 · answered by reeree 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Needs more substance, more than 3 word lines. Good start!
2007-06-15 08:30:40 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow sounds like your heart broken
this to shall pass ,just
let him know he can kiss your a$s
no.... I loved it straight and to the point....
keep up the great work...
2007-06-15 08:38:17 · answer #7 · answered by ♥Saw Dust♥ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I liked it. It was interesting. I write poetry too!
You should post it in Arts and humanities- poetry.
Good job though!
:)
2007-06-15 08:31:34 · answer #8 · answered by Kara P 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yeah its pretty good. Its fresh and light, not to sad
2007-06-15 08:32:45 · answer #9 · answered by saldate4 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
omg soooo good
but i would leave the ctrl alt delete part out, i didnt understand it
2007-06-15 08:31:03 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋