My birthday is tomorrow and I want you to write me something special. A message, poem (doesn't have to ryhme), song lyrics, whatever. You don't even have to say "Happy Birthday" in it. And I am NOT doing this to be selfish and be all "I'm so much better than you". I am doing it because I want to see your talents.
2007-06-15 07:00:52 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Lyrics
I wrote this for English class and I really like it, it's a poem.
My Timeless Love
Come to me my love
Like invisible hands gave you a shove.
Your feet soundless on the healthy green grass.
Your gray eyes soft like a mirror's fogged glass
Come to me my dear
Since last we've met I've longed to hold you near.
To feel your smooth skin against my cheek
To hear your mellow voice that always makes my knees go weak
Come to me my sweet
Your smile's radiance stronger than any flame's heat
You smell of lavender and chamomile
And when you're close my heart goes still
Come to me my heart
Run away from what has torn us apart
It was your love for another that was our downfall
Your love for some other that has made us hit this wall
Now I beg you with all my heart and soul
To bring me out of this black hole.
2007-06-15 07:16:26 · answer #1 · answered by Roselle 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
hey sawty its your birthday i saw you inside there drinking then i said im gonna buy you drank so i probably suck but my other songs i write are better i just dont think some times
2007-06-15 14:18:49 · answer #2 · answered by gary_angell 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
have a great day and great year
2007-06-15 14:09:55 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋