"who am i?" another poem about me. what do u think?

Question

“Who am I?”

I am a drip of water
Dripping on and on
Until the base is full
I flow over when it is full
That is who I am and who I want to be
That is my best place to me

“What am I?”

I am a new plant
Coming out of the dirt
Struggling to come out
To be the earth’s precious gift
I am the morning sun light
Fighting over the darkness of night
I am the evening moon light
Taking over the dim sun light
To give the world a new bright
Day of light

“Where am I?”

I am in the Atlantic Ocean
Looking above the two directions
I look up to see the west
And I see a bunch of new lights
I look up to the east
I see the past years of delight
I see deep inside the east
And my head hearts from
The memories of the past
I feel sad that I am absent
But I feel good that I am present

“What can I be?”

Me.
Who is exactly me?
I don’t know surely
But I know I want to be me
Who is always happy
Someone who sees the world beauty
Someone who sees the dark side of life
And be a continuous light

“What am I as me?”
I am same and different
I am someone who learns from the past
And that is why I am always happy
When I am just like me!

i wrote this poem in 8th grade. the 3rd stanza, "where am i" talks about the two directions which are Africa and North America. I am from Ethiopia so that is what i am talkin about when i say the east.

Answer 1

It is an inspired poem on the theme of indivuality and happiness. You don't pretend there is no sorrow in the world and yet you can see the joy beyond our woes.
We never really know who we are, as we see only a part of ourselves, we don't know how others see us and our view will be subjective, and we are always changing. Life is change, for without change we are "pillars of salt", like Lot's wife in the Bible who looked back at Sodom (lingered on and was covered by volcanic ash). You cannot dwell on the past or you will be like her, a stone.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

cool poem..i have read it b4..
i liked the "what can i be?" part and the last 2 lines
i am not deep like that, atleast my poemz arent

Answer 4

got it now. surely, you've got talent to explore further this elusive identity. Always remember you are unique in answer to your question, Who is exactly me?



best

Answer 5

u would do fine in a coffee shop reading

Answer 6

great poem