When Margaret touched the sleeve of the coat, she knew immediately that it was real fur.
If not, what is wrong with it?
2007-06-14 16:31:30 · 7 answers · asked by Sahar 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Yes, it's fine as is.
2007-06-14 16:35:58 · answer #1 · answered by Beach Saint 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no its a run on sentence,
When Margaret touched the sleeve of the coat. She knew it was real fur.
or
When Margaret touched the sleeve of the coat, therefore she knew it was real fur.
2007-06-14 17:00:08 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's actually 2 sentences. You have a run-on sentence.
When Margaret Touched the sleeve of the coat.
She knew immediately that it was real fur.
2007-06-14 16:41:09 · answer #3 · answered by ✿Donna❀ 7 · 0⤊ 2⤋
It's not a run on sentence, and it is grammatically correct.
2007-06-15 04:41:40 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i believe it should be "she immediately knew that it was real fur."
2007-06-14 16:46:02 · answer #5 · answered by Boweezy Sheezy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yea it's fine
2007-06-14 16:39:56 · answer #6 · answered by Someone 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sure- it's fine.
2007-06-14 16:39:32 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋