We'll will never know
Which road has been traveled more.
Which hallway,
Which door,
Has never been opened before.
We'll never see,
The scars that hide deep within
The thoughts,
The fears,
The visions created by sin.
If we could but hold,
the burning persistence of time,
and its unyielding march,
To and end without reason or rhyme,
We’d live in a world,
without walls,
without fear,
Under the light,
Of one blinding tear.
We’d live in a time without hatred or greed,
Above the blackest of nights,
inside all encompassing need.
Step up young man,
And place it all on the line.
Move forward my dear,
To a newly engineered crime.
Step up my sweet,
And give it all that you’ve got.
Walk away happy,
And embrace the pain you forgot.
2007-06-14 12:14:51 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I loved it! That was really good! It had a very nice flow to it and loved the concept. You really grasped my attention right from the beggining. (by the way, the first word in the poem is well without the apostrophy) I give it a 10/10!
2007-06-14 13:54:41 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow!! I really like this one!! "Embrace the pain you forgot"..Words of wisdom...if we'd ALL have the courage the world would be a different one.
2007-06-14 22:09:14 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh wow....I like it
This one left me at a loss for words
2007-06-15 09:56:41 · answer #3 · answered by FallenAngel© 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm feelin' it. Deep man, Deeeep.
2007-06-15 17:16:51 · answer #4 · answered by Rina 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dude, this is sweet. I love it. It's something I'd dream up but not be able to put to paper as well. Thanks very much.
2007-06-14 19:23:17 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
its nice. keep the good work up
2007-06-14 19:23:25 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋