Is my cinquain good?

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Is my cinquain good?

I have to write a cinquain for homework. It is about marriage. What do you think?

Marriage
Lasting commitment
Comforting, fulfilling, loving
A union of partners
Interlacing

2007-06-14 09:08:17 · 2 answers · asked by <3 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay

2 answers

I don't think the word "interlacing" works as a synonym for marriage.

Why don't you swap the placement of the words union and interlacing?

Marriage
Lasting commitment
Comforting, fulfilling, loving
An interlacing of partners
Union

2007-06-14 09:23:36 · answer #1 · answered by Beach Saint 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Lasting Commitment is 5 syllables.

2007-06-14 09:15:51 · answer #2 · answered by Ottertopia 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋