"thank you for your consideration of this proposal."
2007-06-14 08:35:58 · 7 answers · asked by cynthia s 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
If it were my proposal or my company's proposal, I would change the possessive adjective from "this" to "my" or "our."
Either sentence is fine. If you are dealing with a younger, more hip company use the first sentence. If the person you are dealing with is more conservative, use the second one.
2007-06-14 08:50:00 · answer #1 · answered by Beach Saint 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you are directly speaking with the person then"Thank you for considering this proposal" is good.
If you are writing a mail or letter then "Thank you for your consideration of this proposal" is better.
2007-06-15 05:54:08 · answer #2 · answered by Push I 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like Thank you for considering this proposal better-less formal sounding yet professional.
2007-06-14 15:43:45 · answer #3 · answered by Sophiesmama 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i think "thank you for your consideration of this proposal". it just has that...i don't know, it sounds a bit more professional.
either would do though, probably.
2007-06-14 15:44:19 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
thank you for considering this proposal sounds better
good luck = )
2007-06-14 15:45:36 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
The first option; it sounds less passive -- and it takes fewer words.
2007-06-14 15:43:42 · answer #6 · answered by macguffin 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The latter.
2007-06-14 19:29:43 · answer #7 · answered by ppr 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋