This is the sentence I want revised. My friend was disappointed that his cousin told him that he got married after the fact. Here is the sentence I want revised, dont think it sounds right with word "about" twice
I could understand how you feel about hearing about your cousin's wedding.
Please revise that sentence so it sounds better, any writers or someone with good writing skills, thanks
2007-06-14 05:12:09 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Here you are:
I could understand how you feel ON hearing about your cousin's wedding.
Doesn't it sound good?
Engish is Great!
2007-06-14 05:15:52 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I can understand the way you felt upon hearing of your cousin's wedding
2007-06-14 12:21:03 · answer #2 · answered by Maria b 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I understand your feelings regarding the news of your cousins wedding.
Or
I understand your feelings in regards to hearing of your cousins wedding.
2007-06-14 12:58:05 · answer #3 · answered by Melissa B 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I could understand how you feel about hearing about your cousin's wedding.
Revise to:
I understand how you feel regarding learning about your cousin's wedding after the fact.
2007-06-14 12:23:15 · answer #4 · answered by Matt D 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I can understand how you felt when you heard about your cousins wedding
2007-06-14 12:22:01 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋