Is this a good introduction?

Question

A big hairy animal that can grow over 13 feet tall.
they are more closely related to the modern Asian Elephant than either of the two African elephants. The common ancestor of both mammoths and Asian elephants split from the line of African elephants about 6 - 7.3 million years ago. This is the woolly mammoth.

Answer 1

Start out with this:

The wolly mammoth is a big hairy animal that can grow over 13 feet tall.

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Do you know a big hairy animal that can grow over 13 feet tall? This is the woolly mammoth.

Answer 2

Reorganise as follows :
During Jurassic period the ancestors of present Asiatic & African Elephants were present & identified by reserachers through excavation of fossils.The Ancestros exhibitted the following characters.
It had woolly body which is not seen with modern elephants.
It was comparatively taller than modern elephants.
Its trunck & tusks were(especially male ones) quiet legnthier than the present ones.
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Answer 3

Yes, it sounds a good introduction.

Answer 4

You might mention the size of their massive, steaming poops, and how often they pooped, and the shape, and consistency of their poops, e.g., watery, dry, log shaped, pie shaped, creamy or chunk style.