what do you honestly think about my poem? comment on it please? btw im 16...its call Bittersweet Farwell?

Question

Another day
Another week
Another month
Another year
all have gone by
time has fly
THe beginning wa sin September
It was a time to remember
the end was in June
it has come too soon
The hightlights were bright
I turned sweet six teen
I finally found my dream
Pictures taken
Y earbooks
cherished memories
of this year
i will hold dear
closure to an end
a new beginning to start
A bittersweet farewell
THis is not my last
because im going to be back
my farewell

Answer 1

awww!that is sweet!!!

Answer 2

it is okay, kind of choppy but perhaps that is what your going for. It matter not what you write just as long as you do it.