I want to revise this sentence not revising the adjective peaceful but revising the part that says "at least" I am referring to someone's house my friend was at and they were worried how people would be acting towards him and who would be there. This is sentence I want revised, thanks. Would like writers and teachers anyone who has good writing skills but just dont tell me to leave it as is because I want to revise
"At least everyone was peaceful."
2007-06-12 06:42:37 · 5 answers · asked by simplemiss71 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
"Thankfully, everyone was peaceful," sounds nice since I think you are wanting to take the negative spin of off the sentence that 'at least' gives it.
You could even just take the 'at least' part off all together and just have it be "Everyone was peaceful."
2007-06-12 06:48:39 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Things were peaceful, though I had trepidations.
Everything was peaceful, despite the obvious tensions.
Though things were peaceful, worry furrowed the brows of many a guest.
On the surface things were peaceful, but chaos reigned within the minds of the attendees.
Many people were cordial, peaceful.
Peace reigned over all, violence hid in the shadows waiting to pounce.
All of the guests were peaceful, though more violent thoughts raced through their minds.
2007-06-12 13:57:17 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Thank goodness everybody was peaceful.
The good thing is that everyone was peaceful.
these are just two suggestions.
2007-06-12 13:50:08 · answer #3 · answered by jess:) 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
At last, everyone was peaceful.
2007-06-12 13:46:32 · answer #4 · answered by loufedalis 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Everyone was peaceful.
Despite any perceived discomfort, everyone seemed peaceful.
Everyone was at ease with each other.
2007-06-12 13:47:43 · answer #5 · answered by Lady G 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋