please anyone help to correct my english grammar?

Question

The modern people time is the money, if because of bustled about has neglected the most important family, certainly was you is not willing to see, actually so long as some people could help you to handle the life trivial matters, let your much time accompany the family member ;Believed certainly can happily cause your life to be harmonious. Our company has strong and the specialized service team, is grasping the relations which the specialized clean faith management manner and the creation customer, the staff and the enterprise three wins for the idea under, all strictly checks to each operational procedure by five star classes hotels standard, and will establish set of perfect databases for yours house to provide the customer the most perfect high-quality service.
Believed you certainly have: Person in overseas but house urgent need service, actually cannot find road of such experience the solution. This time you certainly hoped has to be worth trusting the team at your service.

Below is the service content which we provides:
□ The room stops up dredging with water leakage processing; Each kind of main item, valve Service and replacement
□ Health bath equipment and kitchen pipeline damage service and replace men
□Breakdown and so on room circuit pipeline, lamps and lanterns, electrical fitting and switch plug Removes
□All wooden kind of products damage service
□In room all attires facing (including ceramic tile, paint, coating and wallpaper) and so on damage Service and replacement
□Bilateral other agreement contents

Other service projects
□After house repair all clearing
□The boarder enters front and returns a house the after clearing
□In room air conditioning regular clean and maintenance
□The domestic electric appliances breakdown replaces the contact and the newspaper repairs
□In room each item of equipment regular tracing inspection
□The vacant room periodic inspection is clean
□Bilateral other agreement contents
□The letter forwards the service
□The generation gives the water and electricity charges
□Receives on another's behalf the rent and the generation saves
□Acts as an agent the key
The signing a treaty customer part all work content as well as the correlation service, all will have makes the confirmation by the customer facsimile or the network information.

Service remuneration for services rendered standard
1. The room number determines each year according to the room in the charge amount
(In room living room according to an idea, Wei Yu, kitchen does not count)
Two services remuneration for services rendered: Renminbi:4,000 Yuan
Three services remuneration for services rendered: Renminbi:5,000 Yuan
Four services remuneration for services rendered: Renminbi:6,000 Yuan
Five services remuneration for services rendered: Renminbi:7,000 Yuan
Below serves the remuneration for services rendered to analogize in turn.

2. The house temporarily nobody housing (or hiring), also you also are willing to entrust us to carry on the maintenance routine maintenance, the service remuneration for services rendered standard are
Within half year nobody housing, according to above service remuneration for services rendered standard 70% idea
Within a year nobody housing, according to above service remuneration for services rendered standard 50% idea

3. Besides the service remuneration for services rendered, like will replace each kind of fitting, the material and so on charges the material expense according to the actual purchase price; The maintenance time will surpass 2 day above suitably to charge the labor cost (a man-hour of unit price will be: 100 Yuan/people Day); Replaces the domestic electric appliances which the newspaper repairs according to the actual service situation to charge the fee

4. The service remuneration for services rendered gathers a time according to each year, after first gathers serves. If has the extra disbursement part (for example: Material expense, labor cost and maintenance cost and so on), then this expense may depend on you to facilitate time again pays


Lives in contentment the management service center

Answer 1

Okay, this is WAY too long to be much fun. I'd not only ask for pay to wade thru this, I'd want to have interactive access so I could ask you questions.
I suggest you hire a good English speaker (or writer), part-time or on piece work, to help you with your English-language output. Or there are companies online that do translations from and into English. It might be cost-effective just to send them the Chinese and then for you to ask any questions you have about their results. Your English IS good enough for you to catch some errors and obscurities . . . but bad enough that you can't be sure if you're the one making a mistake.

Answer 2

It depends where in the sentence you use the phrase. Subjective example: He and I are the same age. Objective example: They looked at him and me. In English, it is correct to put yourself, (I or me) last. Edit: only Jen O & the Alex just above me are correct.