Reword this sentence Pleeeaase? Will agen take 2 mins?

Question

Jenny J and Figgy thanks for your response plus the others responses

I am a hard working, well focused, well-presented, articulate with excellent communication and interpersonal knowledge of Microsoft Office (Word,Excel,Power Point and Outlook), I enjoy working with people and within the team and I can also work well when under pressure.

Answer 1

"'Gis a job" ... as said in the NE.

why not say "i know the s h i t, give us the job"?

they'll sack you anyway - if you dont!!!

better to speak the truth!

Answer 2

I am a hard working, well focused, well-presented and self sufficient.

I am articulate with excellent communication and interpersonal knowledge of Microsoft Office (Word,Excel,Power Point and Outlook).

I enjoy working with people and within the team and I can also work well when under pressure

Answer 3

I am a hard working, focused,well presented articulate individual. I have excellent communication and interpersonal skills coupled with a knowledge of Microsoft office (Word, Excel,PowerPoint and Outlook). I enjoy working with people and have the ability to work as a team, I am dedicated and motivated and as such ,work well when under pressure.

Make it more than one sentence long sentences seem long winded and boring on what i guess is a employment related document.

Answer 4

I am an articulate, hard-working, focused individual with excellent communication and interpersonal skills. I am familiar with the Microsoft Office programs, including Word, Excel, PowerPoint and Outlook, and I enjoy working with others and under pressure.

Answer 5

I am hardworking, well-focused, well presented, articulate with excellent communication and interpersonal knowlege of Microsoft Office (Word, Excel, Power Point, and Outlook). I enjoy working with people within a team environment. I also work well under pressure.

Answer 6

mintycakeyfroggy got it almost correct... I copied her answer, tweaked it and - now I've pasted it in - I'm off to give her a thumbs up... her tweaked answer follows

I am a hard working, focused, well presented articulate individual who has excellent communication and interpersonal skills, coupled with a knowledge of Microsoft office (Word, Excel, PowerPoint and Outlook).

I enjoy working with people and have the ability to work as part of a team.

I am dedicated and motivated and, as such, work well when under pressure.

(Good luck by the way)

Answer 7

I enjoy working in a team. As an eloquent and well-spoken person, I believe that hard work pays off, and with my knowledge of computer programs like Microsoft Office, I believe that I will be able to work efficiently under pressure.

P.S.: Don't mind my English, I'm just 13(and a half).

Answer 8

Get rid of the sentence(s) & list the adjectives with bullets. Creating white space on a resume is always better than a run-on sentence that is too full of information.

BTW, I'm not so sure that "articulate" is ever acceptable to be used as a noun. Include it in the bullet list instead.

Answer 9

I have to agree with the poster above.

If you need help rewording a sentence describing yourself, then you shouldn't really claim you have good communication skills, should you?

Answer 10

Sorry, I just had to point out that saying you're articulate when you want people to reword a sentence for you is a bit ironic.

Answer 11

that's as much as six sentences. you will possibly be conscious or reword it as you spot greater healthful. in case you do no longer understand the place one sentence ends and the subsequent starts, than you do no longer understand the place certainly one of your innovations end, and the subsequent starts. (SHe grew to become right into a actual sources agent)(she in no way have been given good grades in school)(she had to pass to community college)(she did no longer like it in any respect)(she had to stay together with her mothers and dads)(They continuously reminded her she grew to become right into a failure.) i will inform you that it feels weird and wonderful to initiate maximum of sentences with a similar be conscious (she).