Never
Never again will someone take from me,
alter my life, steal my ability to see.
You've stolen from me my innocence,
you and you're blatant ignorance.
The priest who stole my innocence,
will burn in hell for his insolence.
Eternity in hell, It is he who will shriek,
I only wish that I could just take a peak.
Retribution is mine the Lord he did say,
but Satan will wield the whip that will flay.
A priest who would take the youth of a child,
deserves a punishment, ruthless and wild.
I know this poem is a rhyming mess,
but try to understand and critique is less.
Demons and anger I must get it out,
This is the way from the mountain I shout.
Thanks to everyone for helping me to get through this. I love you all.
2007-06-11 07:57:45 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Psychology
My undercover poet:
The priest is burned not only in hell, but in your life. Don't keep that past torment in you. In this poem, you open the eyes of people who suffer the same. Keep this poem as a key to freedom, don't let this tormented boy that you see in your poems ruin you, that's why i love your poetry, because is an art to reveal your true self, look at the innocent eyes of your childhood. Your poems are the best, don't ever change.
Your angel of San Juan, your #1 fan
2007-06-11 09:08:58 · answer #1 · answered by . 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I LOVE all of your poems. I am very sorry for what happened in your childhood. But, at least you know that it is he who will burn in Hell for eternity, not you. and I am glad you can get your anger out through poetry.
God bless you,
:)
kara
2007-06-11 15:07:16 · answer #2 · answered by Kara P 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Poetry is the best medicine. I like the poem, the last stanza especially. Keep writing my friend!
2007-06-11 21:21:51 · answer #3 · answered by shadowofu_love29 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm so extrememly proud of you!!!!!! It can be hard for kids to admit things, but to have kept it and finally shared at such an old (:~)) age! I'm writing you a poem, and should be done soon!
2007-06-11 15:25:09 · answer #4 · answered by future_writer_dreamer 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Many hugs and a soft hand on your forehead, little Stevie.These are hard for me to read but it will help your healing and you already know this.
Peace
2007-06-11 22:47:25 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's really good to see you get the anger out. Feels good don't it? Keep up the good work.
2007-06-11 18:19:13 · answer #6 · answered by ace 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like this poem, it is really emotive and sounds like it helped you (or whoever wrote it) to get over a tough time.
2007-06-11 15:05:44 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
i'm trully happy for you, steve.
you d deserve some relief and happiness, after so many years.
peace& love, brother.
your true friend,
and fellow poet,
kayde
2007-06-11 17:28:39 · answer #8 · answered by Minty 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Excellent poem Steve,....glad your making strides..=)
2007-06-11 15:13:18 · answer #9 · answered by legendary~cool 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
not really 2 fond of poetry but this ones really good
2007-06-11 15:01:29 · answer #10 · answered by rockonpeeeps 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋