A kiss is just a kiss,
A flash of flesh...
Lingers,
Hungers...Hungers...
And makes us wait.
A kiss is just a kiss,
The touch of another,
Sets us free,
Just for a moment,
And leaves us in chains.
A kiss is just a kiss,
Sunrise delicate,
Haunts our memories,
When it was wrong...
And when it was not right...
But perfect.
A kiss is just a kiss.
2007-06-11 01:34:48 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Interesting! "A kiss is just a kiss."
But then what is it meant here: "When it was wrong...
And when it was not right..." Yaa. when it was wrong (kind of alluding to moral principles!! kind of tautological!! certainly, what's wrong may not be right in ethical terms! don't you think so?). The hilarious and tantalizing aspect about this kiss is that "A kiss is just a kiss." Wow . . . .Is it!!
2007-06-11 02:57:34 · answer #1 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lovely
2007-06-11 08:54:11 · answer #2 · answered by Stacy R 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem, but change the line 'sunrise delicate' it is out of place in the poems tonal imagery.
2007-06-11 10:23:33 · answer #3 · answered by iscan12345 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you asking if that should be the title? If that's the question, I believe so.
2007-06-11 08:44:14 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
.....Borrowed honey, phantom dreams......
2007-06-11 18:22:17 · answer #5 · answered by Goldberry 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good.
2007-06-11 11:18:42 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋