Life is full of surprises!
Good morning fellow classmates. The subject of my speech is Life’s a Surprise. Life is full of surprises, isn’t? Surprises happen when we least expect them to. Surprise is the world tickling us with joy and delight. It makes us all excited inside. Can you imagine life without surprises? Life would be so… dull, wouldn’t it? Well the good news is that we don’t have to wait for surprise to approach or find us. We can add a whole lot of excitement and pleasure to our own life by building our own surprises.
Surprise someone with a surprise, you just might make a person’s day. A surprise doesn’t have to be costly. A surprise can be simple as greeting someone with a “good morning” or a “hello”, giving someone a contagious smile on your face. Let’s all try to add a little joy and excitement to life. Surprise someone and they will be certainly surprised that you surprised them with a surprising surprise!!!
Now you know what I mean when I say that life is full of surprises and you are one of them. So, let’s welcome the uncertainty of life by using surprise to uncover new opportunities, and discover the joy of life.
2007-06-09 05:04:41 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Good morning fellow classmates. Today I am going to speak on, and demonstrate, the joys of eating beans!
(If you can, open a can of beans, empty and wash it, then fill it with confetti. Or if you have a joke and gag store by you, see if they have a can of something that opens and something pops out. As you read the second sentence above, hold up the can of beans and slowly move it from side to side so everyone can see it. After you read the sentence, still holding the can, pause, then open the can and throw out the confetti saying...)
Surprise!
Okay the real subject of my speech is Life’s a Surprise. Life is full of surprises, isn’t it? Surprises by definition are unexpected events in our life. Good surprises are the world tickling us with joy and delight. They make us all excited and bubbly feeling inside. Can you imagine life without surprises? No surprise birthday parties. No surprise Christmas presents. No surprises on your final English grade. Life would be so dull , wouldn’t it? Well, the good news is that we don’t have to wait for surprise to find us. We can add excitement to our own lives by giving surprises to others.
With a good surprise, you can really make someone’s day extra special. A surprise doesn’t have to be costly, or even cost anything at all.. A surprise can be simple as greeting someone with a smile and a friendly “good morning” or a “hello.” Imagine how it would be tomorrow if each one of us gave an unexpected surprise to someone by smiling at them and saying hello. The happiness you give, will be the happiness you receive and that shouldn’t be a surprise!
Now you know what I mean when I say that life is full of surprises. So, let’s welcome the opportunities in life by using our ability to surprise because you never know when you might need a friendly surprise yourself.
2007-06-09 05:53:17 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Good morning fellow classmates. The subject of my speech is Life is a surprise. Life is full of surprises, isn't it? Surprises happen when we least expect them. Surprise is the world tickling us with joy and delight. It makes us all excited inside. Can you imagine life without surprises? Life would be so… dull. Don't you agree? Well, the good news is that we don’t have to wait for a surprise to find us. We can add a whole lot of excitement and pleasure to our own life by building our own surprises.
Surprise someone with a surprise, you just might make the person’s day. A surprise doesn’t have to be costly either. A surprise can be simple as greeting someone with a “good morning” or a “hello”. Having a contagious smile on your face is also another surprise that is inexpensive. Let’s all try to add a little joy and excitement to life. Surprise someone and they will be certainly pleased that you did!
Now you know what I mean when I said that life is full of surprises; you are one of them. So, let’s welcome the uncertainty of life by using surprise to uncover new opportunities and discover the joy of life.
I did some minor editing. I think it sounds better.
2007-06-09 05:15:22 · answer #2 · answered by barrych209 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hi! I'll try to do my best =) (corrections in caps)
Life is full of surprises!
Good morning, fellow classmates. The subject of my speech is Life IS a Surprise. Life is full of surprises, isn’t IT? Surprises happen when we least expect them to. Surprise is the world tickling us with joy and delight. It makes us all excited inside. Can you imagine life without surprises? Life would be so… dull, wouldn’t it? Well, the good news is that we don’t have to wait for A? surprise to approach US or TO find us. We can add a whole lot of excitement and pleasure to our own life by building our own surprises.
STUN (don't use the same word in one sentence) someone with a surprise, you just might make a person’s day. A surprise doesn’t have to be costly. A surprise can be AS simple as greeting someone with a “good morning” or a “hello” OR giving someone a contagious smile on your (do ou meanTHEIR?) face. Let’s all try to add a little joy and excitement to life. Surprise someone and they will be certainly surprised that you surprised them with a surprising surprise!!! (lol, that made me laugh, hehe!! =] )
Now you know what I MEANT when I SAID that life is full of surprises and you are one of them. So, let’s welcome the uncertainty of life by using surprise to uncover new opportunities, and discover the REAL joy of life.
Hope I helped, it was enjoyable! Just made some minor changes and a couple of commas :) xx
2007-06-09 05:39:57 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Life is full of surprises!
Good morning fellow classmates. The subject of my speech is Life’s a Surprise. Life is full of surprises, isn’t IT? Surprises happen when we least expect them to HAPPEN. Surprise is the world tickling us with joy and delight. It makes us all excited inside. Can you imagine life without surprises? Life would be so… dull, wouldn’t it? Well, the good news is that we don’t have to wait for surprise to approach or find us. We can add a whole lot of excitement and pleasure to our own life by building our own surprises.
Surprise someone, you just might make a person’s day. A surprise doesn’t have to be costly. A surprise can be AS simple as greeting someone with a “good morning” or a “hello”, giving someone a contagious smile on your face. Let’s all try to add a little joy and excitement to life. Surprise someone and they will be certainly surprised that you surprised them with a surprising surprise!!!
Now you know what I mean when I say that life is full of surprises and you are one of them. So, let’s welcome the uncertainty of life by using surprise to uncover new opportunities, and discover the joy of life.
Wonderfully written. I really like it!
2007-06-09 05:14:12 · answer #4 · answered by Me in Canada eh 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1st paragraph: Life is full of surprises, isn’t?
Should be: ...isn't IT?
end of 1st para: We can add a whole lot of excitement and pleasure to our own life by building our own surprises.
Should be: ... to our own LIVES by...
2nd para: Surprise someone with a surprise, you just might make a person’s day.
Should use a semi-colon instead of a comma. ; not ,
2nd para: A surprise can be simple as greeting someone with a “good morning” or a “hello”, giving someone a contagious smile on your face
Should be: ...a "hello," or passing on your own contagious smile.
Last para, final sentence: No need for the comma after ... opportunities.
Should be: ...new opportunities and discover...
2007-06-09 05:15:33 · answer #5 · answered by FIGJAM 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't want to sound harsh but is this an elementary school essay?
The main word is used too much,The word surprise is used 5 times in one sentence.
2007-06-09 05:39:44 · answer #6 · answered by b14417@sbcglobal.net 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
isn't it? you forgot "it"
...pleasure "in" our own life
otherwise, can't find any other mitakes...
2007-06-09 05:10:01 · answer #7 · answered by freebird31wizard 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋