I need to write an essay about my dad, and i really just need a bit of help. Here are the guide lines:
Essay must be no more that 100 words.
"How your father is an inspiration to you in his approach to life and how he treats others."
Essays should focus on:
- Examples of how your father is imparting important life lessons through his words and actions.
- Examples of how your father's dedications to making the world a etter place for his children.
Yea, that's it.
Feel free to use your own dad in your answer, i just need soome help starting this thing....THANKS SO MUCH!
2007-06-09 03:43:11 · 5 answers · asked by the_forbiden_forest 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
You are not looking for help, you're looking for us to write it for you! By the time you had typed this question, you could have written 100 words! Your question is MORE than 100 words.
So, here's my answer. Do your own work so you're not cheating, then post it for critique ... we'll be glad to help ... and shame on those who wrote it for you!
2007-06-09 04:41:28 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would suggest writing down bullet points. For example,
Is the dad a hard worker? Does he believe in the value of honest work? By this he is showing his children diligence, that he values his family enough to support them financially.
Does the dad encourage his children by giving them affection, verbal praise, assistance when you need it? If he does, he is helping his children become more self assured and enabling them to be successful. Also helping them realize the role encouragement plays in a person's life.
Is the dad still married to the mother? By this he is showing that he is faithful to one woman and that he stands with her through thick and thin. He is providing his children a role model for marriage. (naturally marriages are not perfect, but it is a starting off point)
Does the dad spend time with his children? If he does, he is showing his children that they are important enough to him that he will take the time to play with them.
The list can go on and on. I would suggest taking one point and expound upon that. 100 words is not that much for an essay so it should not be too difficult to come up with something.
2007-06-09 03:59:16 · answer #2 · answered by Rach 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
My father was a great inspiration to me. During World War II he suffered wounds that would eventually kill him when he was 40 and when I was aged just 10. However in the short time we had together he taught me the values between right and wrong and how I should always treat other people better than they treated me. Even right up to his untimely death he displayed courage, bravery and optimism and inspired in me a fighting spirit that is still with me 50 years after his passing. God bless you Dad.
Just less than 100 words. I wouldn't call that an essay, more of a statement but, there you are.
2007-06-09 03:57:07 · answer #3 · answered by quatt47 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
You need to write the essay, preview and edit it and then submit it for help. As it stands now, you're asking us to write an essay for you.
2007-06-09 03:49:59 · answer #4 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
My father is not just a father, he is my dad. Being a dad means that a father is actively involved in his child's life. My dad, (insert name) not only is actively involved in my life , but involved in ____ as well.
Okay, there's your start....
good luck
2007-06-09 03:55:41 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋