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of these 3 haikus and why

1.)
pretty little bird,
flying, soaring in the sky,
bringing joy to all.

2.)
a peck on the cheek,
holding me close through hard times,
making me feel safe.

3.)
sitting in the dark,
hiding from the pain and fear,
never any light.

2007-06-08 16:32:22 · 14 answers · asked by iANNA! 5 in Entertainment & Music Polls & Surveys

14 answers

I like them all. All 3 impart a different feeling...depending on the mood you're in...but at the moment I think the second one holds the most meaning for me! ;o)

2007-06-08 16:44:56 · answer #1 · answered by F-1 says KISS IT! 7 · 0 0

3

2007-06-16 18:49:13 · answer #2 · answered by jacpie 4 · 0 0

Number 2, because love is the root of everything good in life. and is way happier than some stupid bird soaring in the sky. When a guy wraps a girl in his arms and makes her feel safe, it is like putting a princess into a castle, the most protection she could ask for. This is an extremely good haiku.

2007-06-08 23:37:29 · answer #3 · answered by Mike 2 · 0 0

Number 3.

2007-06-08 23:37:06 · answer #4 · answered by wallflower♪ 5 · 0 0

# 2, What I Wish I had. I have the Most Wonderful Husband, he makes the Best Dad, Best Friend, The Best Pastor, etc. But I get a Little lost in the shuffle. He will give me any material thing I want or need, tells me how Beautiful I am. But, can Never Truly be There for Just me when I need him. He'll be there when my family is n need, he'll go so way overboard for my family, I can't complain, they Love him Dearly.
No pity parties, I have a good life, just a lonely one, where it would be nice to know that I could count on him during the Hard times.

2007-06-16 20:28:17 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

a peck on the cheek,
holding me close through hard times,
making me feel safe.
because it the most chearfull

2007-06-08 23:36:24 · answer #6 · answered by red_star_56 4 · 0 0

1- because of its simplicity and a graceful way to show a bird's strength and majesty

2007-06-09 00:52:36 · answer #7 · answered by Dave aka Spider Monkey 7 · 0 0

2.)

2007-06-08 23:36:36 · answer #8 · answered by OC 7 · 0 0

The first one. It sounds really joyful

2007-06-08 23:35:22 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

#2, love it when girls love guys. feels like the world is right

2007-06-08 23:36:35 · answer #10 · answered by REDWINGS SUCK 2 · 0 0

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