Depression is a knife that pierces all
Faith is gone, truth is lost
At times I think of death and what it‘s like
Black rose are in my dreams
Black butterflies soar in my mind
I can’t take it, death is at my feet
I scream and thrash, my heart I broken
No one to love, no one to live
Tears are streaming down my face
I cry to the gods, so high above
I cry for months I cry for years
My heart aching with every breath I take
So alone, so rejected, it’s time to move on
2007-06-08 04:15:34 · 6 answers · asked by indigochic101 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
some of the best poems are dark ones because it's easy to let your feelings flow. so don't get all snooty about it. and I'm only 14 and I have lots of time to grow.
2007-06-08 04:47:08 · update #1
unoriginal and uninteresting...
2007-06-08 04:19:24 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I can see from your poems that you are depressed and upset - but honestly, Philosophy is probably not the best place to post this stuff....
What I can tell you is that, despite the fact that life has no intrinsic meaning and is nothing more than a horizontal march towards death - it IS worth living. The very fact that life is short is what gives it its sweetness. You are responsible for creating the meaning and happiness in your life - so either get some therapy or stop with the pity party and go enjoy your life - it will be over soon enough as it is
2007-06-08 11:37:08 · answer #2 · answered by FIGJAM 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Please listen to me and know that its true
Your depression is lying to you
People do care
Lay your soul bare
Dont give up your life
Put away that knife
I have felt the pain
that living is in vain
it is all delusion
to create confusion
fight and be strong
because you do belong
Without all tears
and those painful years
you dont know how beautiful life can be
just talk to people who care so you can see
I have been fooled by the chemicals in my brain
but I have been lucky and now I feel sane
It can be achieved
you can be relieved
understand its not really you
that makes you feel the way you do
talk to me and you will see
that by living you can set your heart free
2007-06-08 11:29:45 · answer #3 · answered by carlina 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Great, but depressing.
2007-06-08 11:28:43 · answer #4 · answered by d_nanner 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
likes this one too
2007-06-08 11:25:51 · answer #5 · answered by grey_worms 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
One category down, please.
2007-06-08 11:40:50 · answer #6 · answered by Sophist 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋