glass window,
separating me from the world,
keeping me from harm,
but leaving me empty,
isolated,
oblivious to what is just feet away,
only giving you a small picture of the world,
shields me from everything,
good or bad.
2007-06-07 11:28:06 · 20 answers · asked by iANNA! 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
yep..... its a poem
2007-06-07 11:31:19 · answer #1 · answered by troisième oeil ouvert 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-11-07 21:32:09 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked it. Everyone looks through a different window but I think you have touched on the constant.
2007-06-07 11:33:58 · answer #3 · answered by Harvest 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's pretty good, but the line that starts "Only giving you..." doesn't quite fit in. I'd leave out "only" and change "you" to "me", to keep it in line with the rest. It's good, don't give it up
2007-06-07 11:36:45 · answer #4 · answered by Taylor29 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good form! But damn, you need to get out more. You definitly made me feel your lonliness and I'm sorry for you
2007-06-14 21:37:50 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great!!! You should publish it. Not kidding.
Keep up the good work!
2007-06-07 11:33:33 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
fantastic! a poet indeed. Who else could talk about a window as though it actually inspires.
2007-06-07 11:32:45 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awesome poetry!!!!! >3 I totally love it!! You should think about being a poet one day! That is if you don't have something else in mind!! Your really good!!!!!!!!! Wow start doing my language homework please? lol Just playing but very good!!!!!!!
2007-06-07 11:33:12 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Excellent! Very gothic, like me :)
2007-06-15 09:55:13 · answer #9 · answered by Tea-time 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's pretty good actually!!!!!!
Nice job.
Keep going.
2007-06-15 09:54:49 · answer #10 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is okay, but it is kind of negative and makes me feel sad.
2007-06-15 06:00:20 · answer #11 · answered by Samarama 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋