My friend wrote this awhile ago and wanted to know my opinion on it, I told her it was really pretty but she was wondering a second opinion and asked me to ask on here. What do you think about it honestly?
"Sometimes i throw myself at the wind, to see how far it will take me, and try to catch a glipse of elegance that's surrounding. the beauty that was our blessing and thank you for taking over this earth and gripping its life in our hands. sometimes i lay in the sand and listen to the ocean speak, as it collides with into a peacful touch of the timeless sand. which will hold us together through an etirnety. sometimes i watch the night sky pass me by, and try to catch a breath between two stars so I can live in relief to know our beauty still remains in place. and if i listen with all attention i can hear the exhaling of the heavens unraveling its strength it took to create this beautiful home we've come to know as ours."
what do you think?
2007-06-06 08:24:21 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
i hate poetry but it was still good.... really good
2007-06-06 14:20:00 · answer #1 · answered by Bball_playa 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful.
2007-06-06 08:30:44 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
in step with risk attempt making use of a few fancy words. loopy--in step with risk a various you are able to sound greater advantageous "flow paths with distinctive harmless human beings" and the the subsequent line "in spite of each and every little thing,they do no longer care" its kinda contradicting the words and then in step with risk attempt greater effective ideas approximately others too and then approximately your self on the 4 way intersection,there are better than undesirable human beings in this international. and that i admire the way it ended with"at a 4 way intersection" "leaving a path of destruction of their wake" spectacular line! there fore they cant be reached...that tells alot so yea those are my opinion,desire you be an incredible poet sometime..shop up the sturdy paintings!
2016-10-07 00:12:58 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
beautiful great love it she is good
2007-06-06 08:27:49 · answer #4 · answered by marsh 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it, she does great work
at bringing you with her in her fantasy of words
tell her thanks for sharing ...here is a star>>>>>>*
2007-06-06 08:32:19 · answer #5 · answered by ♥Saw Dust♥ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Amazing.. i love it
2007-06-06 08:29:03 · answer #6 · answered by roaaaarrrrr 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋