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i recently wrote this poem but i dont quite know what to title it. i was sort of leaning to "A Life of Death" but i personally think it sucks and lacks pinash.


Light barely enters his world of pixels and isolation,
where his only companion is his TV screen.
Day and night he communes with it.
To him, it is almost as powerful as a deeply religious experience.
Its influence gently tugs at his conscience,
permeating his every thought,
it consumes him in its gentle caress.
It is in the very air he breathes.
Without even realizing he is in its power
he naively believes he is independent of it.
Insidious in its incursion,
it leeches him until he is nothing
but an empty shell of his former self.
Freed from its grasp,
he has no choice but to embrace the cold, eternal slumber of death.

2007-06-04 15:35:45 · 23 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Poetry

23 answers

Pixels of Isolation

2007-06-11 15:32:32 · answer #1 · answered by Senator D*L*P™ 5 · 0 0

My first thought was "Empty Shell", but the others wrote "Pixels and Isolation" and that has a ring to it!

2007-06-10 22:00:28 · answer #2 · answered by dizzkat 7 · 0 0

Pixel Man?

Death by lack of self?

Sneaky death?

2007-06-06 10:22:16 · answer #3 · answered by henry d 5 · 0 0

Life

2007-06-04 22:37:59 · answer #4 · answered by Ashley V. 2 · 0 3

Beneath the truth

2007-06-04 23:37:17 · answer #5 · answered by Lv M 3 · 0 0

I think you should take the title from the poem. I personally like, "Pixels and Isolation" as the title.

2007-06-04 22:39:06 · answer #6 · answered by clairvoyant_dreamer 3 · 2 1

Drum roll please>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Code Blue".

2007-06-04 23:01:23 · answer #7 · answered by duccees 3 · 0 0

Trance

2007-06-04 22:41:06 · answer #8 · answered by ? 3 · 1 0

Life or death:

2007-06-05 10:03:54 · answer #9 · answered by sweet_blue 7 · 0 0

I too like "pixels and Isolation"...you could also title it "self Deception" because he convinced himself that he wasnt a slave to the T.V. when he actually was.

2007-06-04 22:46:13 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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