Beyond Reach
The wind calls to your senses
The waves call out to the sea.
Wherever the light hits the dawn
The lark calls out for its tree
Upon a life of darkened crimes
The water ripples free
Unless commanded by the waves
The ripples are clear to see
Beyond the sight of the opened eye
Beyond the dark and sea
Upon a stage of water and salt
The water ripples free
2007-06-04 09:54:58 · 21 answers · asked by Rosa T 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
She has a talent that nobody can take away from her. Encourage her and she can go places with an creative imagination like hers.
It was a very very good poem.
2007-06-04 10:02:01 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
If a 10 year old child did indeed write this, you should take her to a special gifted children school for education. I find it hard to believe but it is a thoughtful poem.
2007-06-04 10:00:15 · answer #2 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow. I'm 12, and I couldn't even write that good of a poem. You have a gifted child. That's a great poem! I really like it! Keep up the good work! :)
2007-06-04 09:58:59 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, that is a very good poem for a 10-year-old. I hope she keeps it up, poetry is such a good outlet for girls her age. I used to love writing poems too when I was her age.
2007-06-04 09:59:44 · answer #4 · answered by fizzygurrl1980 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow that was written by a 10 year old? Very nice.
2007-06-04 09:58:47 · answer #5 · answered by Vanessa B 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
YOUR 10 YR OLD WROTE THAT
JUST A QUESTION HAS THE TERM "PRODIGY COME TO MIND."
COOL
I CAN'T WRITE LIKE THAT AND I'M 14 \
GREAT ANOTHER THING I CAN'T DO AS GOOD AS A 10 YR OLD
GOD I MUST BE A LOSER
BUT THAT POEMS COOL.
TELL YOUR DAUGHTER GOOD JOBS
2007-06-04 10:05:02 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I personally enjoyed it. I'm merely two years older than her, and I enjoy writing poems as well. =] She has talent! Keep encouraging her & she'll end up doign great things. Best wishes!
2007-06-04 09:58:02 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ITS AWESOME!!! but there is no way a 10 year old could write that. my lil sis (same age) can barely use proper grammar, she could never write a poem with that much flow and precise timing.
2007-06-04 09:59:26 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
thats bloody good for a 10 year old
2007-06-04 09:58:12 · answer #9 · answered by alexsau1991 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
for a 10-year-old that really isn't bad. great job! she's probably going to be a good writer when she gets older!
2007-06-04 09:58:36 · answer #10 · answered by Manda 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋