I wish he was here- My poem, all comments appreciated!?

Question

The alarm clock goes off and it's six am,
I look at the bed, and really miss him.
there's an empty space in my king size bed,
I wish that beside me would be his sleeping head.

His snoring used to annoy me so much,
now I would give anything to hear it, to feel the touch
of his warm hot breath on my neck,
I wish he were here, God, i must be an emotional wreck.

I loved him so much, why did he leave me,
When he was around life was so easy,
Now that he's gone,
I am all alone.

I find little comfort that I may see him when I die,
Why did he leave, Why?
He shouldn't have died, not so young,
He had a future, and a soon to be born son.

Now his son is twenty four,
and awhile ago he walked out the door,
to go to college and get a carreer,
oh, now I really wish he were here.

I loved him so much, more then he could know,
I just wish I could have told him that before he had to go,
when he died he took half my heart away,
but I hope to see him again some day.

:)

Answer 1

I really like it. It tells a story, lets you know what's going on, and keeps you interested. Good Job!!! And if this poem is true, my condolences to you and yours for your loss, but I'm sure he knows how much you love him. Ciao!!!

Answer 2

I really liked the ideas in your poem. To me, it seems like it would make a better song than a poem, what do you think? It could be very powerful for women whose husbands were killed in the war, as well as women who were widowed due to some other tragedy- a lot of people can identify with your subject matter, is what I'm saying.

Answer 3

I love it!! I love the way it sounds and how you can tell, that you put your heart into it. It is beautiful. You did a wonderful job.