Do you think
I can write a poem that doesn't stink?
maybe roy d and buk
can help me so i don't suck?
it is really hard to think of a rhyme
i have been sitting here for quite some time
i think now my poem is done
i am going out to go lay in the sun
2007-06-04 06:39:09 · 10 answers · asked by Niffer 6 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
If you go out and lay in the sun
lay on your stomach so I can see your bum
if you fall asleep you know I'm the one
who will jump on you and have my fun
when i nut then I'll be done
I'll get off you now cause I'm blocking your sun
2007-06-04 06:44:31 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well now, Niffler, here's the deal.
Poetry doesn't have to rhyme, and probably shouldn't.
End each line with a word that makes us want to read the next line. Otherwise, you are well on the way.................
Sausage and the glory
of it's grease
can wield a weak
man's heart
in it's hands
and make a strong
man's buttocks
bleed.
2007-06-04 17:57:03 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
That was an ok poem .Go out and get a nice tan and let the inspirational juices flow through you.
2007-06-04 13:46:55 · answer #3 · answered by Dave aka Spider Monkey 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Thank you, dear Niff, for your early birthday wishes.
Go lay in the sun, while I finish the dishes.
I Billy Boy,
Will hope for your joy.
And hope we don's sleep with the fishes.
2007-06-04 13:42:38 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
no one can help it comes from with in and you just need to find a muse ho help let it out you proved you can do it
2007-06-04 13:44:36 · answer #5 · answered by The Steve 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
wow... i'm speechless
just kiddin...poetry is whatever makes you happy so yea it wonderful niffler
2007-06-04 13:43:57 · answer #6 · answered by SweetieGoat 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Quite enjoyable, Niff, thank you!!:)
2007-06-04 13:47:26 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
thats good and its funnyâ¥
2007-06-04 13:41:16 · answer #8 · answered by just peachy 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
thats all you got?
2007-06-04 13:42:48 · answer #9 · answered by Chads Wife 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
looking good girl!!that was good!
2007-06-04 13:44:20 · answer #10 · answered by ....FED UP............ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋