1.The wineglasses are shimmering better than the chandeliers on the ceiling.
2.Those who remained the same can be easily recognized. Those who are changed have stolen the show.
3.A highschool reunion is a celebration of sweet revenge.
4.Hundreds of alumni were there to reunite with friends, whilst others came to make their enemies jealous.
2007-06-04 00:54:27 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
1. wineglasses shimmer MORE BRIGHTLY than
2. Those who HAVE remained . . . (to parallel the second sentence which also has HAVE in it.)
Better writing would be "Those who have remained the same can be easily recognized, while those who have changed have stolen the show.
3. OK
4. OK
2007-06-04 01:53:54 · answer #1 · answered by thisbrit 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1: are displaying a shimmering effect more with more intensity than the ,,,,,
2: Those that have changed stole the show.
3: that is sorta ok,
4: whilst is just a fancy smodge podge of poo poo.
They all look grammatically correct, but any editor worth his salt wold run them over typeset a few times just to make more sense without such a waste of paper or spacial product.
2007-06-04 08:11:16 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. The word 'better' should be changed to 'more'.
2. Those who had remained the same could be easily recognised but those who had changed stole the show.
3. Makes sense.
4. Makes sense.
2007-06-04 08:03:30 · answer #3 · answered by allears 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
on number 2 change the word "are" to "have." That sentence should be in the present perfect tense, because "changed" is a past participle.
2007-06-04 08:02:24 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Grammatically, all are fine.
2007-06-04 07:59:53 · answer #5 · answered by JSGeare 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋