roses are red
winter brings frost
if it wasnt for sat nav
girls would get lost
2007-06-03 01:00:55 · 27 answers · asked by in bed with Jesus 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
haha i have one.
Boys do not work,
they just want to nap.
Zoom is a fatheaded
smelly old crap.
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2007-06-03 02:03:12 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Um the idea is nice, but it is kinda creepy. Why? well when you said" I watch you through your window every night...I watch you playing with your dog Boo", "I'll treat ya real nice", "I'll cuddle you baby, until the day you die", and you started talking about you guys being in a relationship already :P It seems like some rapist/creep is trying to get laid with her (though i know that it's not your intention). I'm sure you can do better.
2016-04-01 13:09:05 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Zoom you chased the day away
Whoa boom, the moon and stars came out to play
Ok I'm lost, whats a sat nav?
2007-06-03 01:11:55 · answer #3 · answered by Silver 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey come on dude,
just because a girl named cold hearted ***** goes all around yahoo!answers insulting men doesn't necessarily mean you have to follow suit and start a full-swing gender war here in P&S!
and i will not respond to that poem!
2007-06-03 01:05:06 · answer #4 · answered by Wisdom on a platter 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry....I can't type through my tears....
Just the sheer pathos and passion that ooze from those few lines....the caring, the compassion for the lost.....well, for once I am speechless.
2007-06-03 10:35:34 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't like it. I hate to say it but it seems like you didn't even try to write the poem. Poems are supposed to have feeling to them, in my opinoin.
2007-06-03 01:04:44 · answer #6 · answered by SweetCocoaAngel 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why are men afraid to ask for directions?
You look like that British singer, Will Young.
2007-06-03 01:03:50 · answer #7 · answered by Cold hearted b*tch 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I suggest that you Zoom off and ask someone to teach you about writing poetry.~~
2007-06-03 01:05:56 · answer #8 · answered by burning brightly 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
I'd give up on poetry,
If I were you!
2007-06-03 01:08:01 · answer #9 · answered by New Boots. 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Lame-o
2007-06-03 01:09:45 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋